This Tired, Lonely Man

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  • compound complex
    compound complex

    Good morning, Kate and Nancy:

    So nice hearing from you, Kate, and welcome to the forum!

    I appreciate your comments, though you are not a poetry person. I haven't a clue why, but since childhood I never could just say something in an ordinary way. Give me a word or phrase and I'm shooting for the outer reaches.

    Are you familiar with the term "prose poetry"? That's what my stuff tends toward.

    Have a wonderful day, new friend. . . .

    CoCo

  • KateWild
    KateWild

    Thanks for your welcome CoCo,

    I don't know why I am not a poetry person, but I do appreciate some of it. I could never write any good though. Except for.....

    There was was a girl named Kate

    She was in a very bad state

    She drank the Kool-aid

    Prayed prayed and prayed

    She's learned TTATT now, so it wasn't too late!!!!

    That was my attempt at a lymeric. How did I do CoCo....be honest not kind, I can handle it-Kate xx

  • compound complex
    compound complex

    Thank you, Kate!

    It's saucy and to the point. Technically, it's nicely composed.

    Stay with it -- you may have underestimated yourself!

    Best.

    CC

  • nancy drew
    nancy drew

    Katewild writes limericks and has lots of fun

    Limericks are treasures that look like the sun

    Limericks burn brightly

    limericks step lightly

    Limericks are great when they're crazily done

  • compound complex
    compound complex

    You're a master of limericks, Nancy!

    THANKS!

    CC

  • KateWild
    KateWild

    Thanks, I will try and stick with it, I need new interests that expand my IQ.-Kate xx

  • friendaroonie
    friendaroonie

    This would read so well in verse. That's how I read it anyway.

  • nancy drew
    nancy drew

    I like the name friendaroonie

  • compound complex
    compound complex

    Me too!

    Welcome, friend!

    CoCo

  • nancy drew
    nancy drew

    friendaroonie is our pal

    friendaroonie guy or gal?

    we don't know and we don't care

    friendaroonie are you there?

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