Good letter and follow suggestions!!!
Oh, and all of the negative chatter about the "F" word.
Look people, it is not such a big deal! It used to piss me off how elders on the Golf Course would swear like hookers when they muffed up their drives and puts, but if anyone came forward accusing a "Fucking Elder" of molesting a child, the issue would then change to revolve around the use of vulgarity. Gulping down the camel and straining out the gnat.
Perhaps you who are so sensitive to foul language should read Jesus' own foul mouth rant in Matt 23! There is no way that "whitewashed graves", "full of dead mans bones" and "offspring of vipers" was not taken in by the receivers with the worst possible offense.
In the idiom of the time he called them "fucking liars" and "fucking hypocrites" plain and simple.
Then there is Paul wishing that the super fine apostles would get their peckers cut off Gal 5:12!
Therefore inserting expletives is fitting and proper, even apostolic!
Frank75